During the night, Hazel’s baby brother had a high fever. Mother said to Hazel, “he needs medicine from the witch. You must go and find her .” So, Hazel set out into the misty night. She went through the darkness and finally found the witch's house. So she could get the medicine and she could be a brave big sister.
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Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better
During the night, Hazel’s baby brother had a high fever.
This sentence is correct.
Mother said to Hazel, “he needs medicine from the witch. You must go and find her .”
This sentence is correct.
So, Hazel set out into the misty night.
This sentence is correct.
She went through the darkness and finally found the witch's house.
This sentence is correct.
So she could get the medicine and she could be a brave big sister.
This sentence is correct.
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